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  1. hvnhpro Member

    em là Vũ Nam học lớp thứ 2,6 thầy TranNgocVui sửa giùm bài này cho e với:xoayvong::xoayvong::xoayvong:
    1)Do you like football?
    Well as you can probably guest, I like football. Although at the moment there are many sports, I think that football is the most favourite sport. I give you some tips on how to play foofball.
    The first, it had several good points to recommend it. We like the fact that it is esay to begin play, so we could emmediately play.

    2)Oversea studying studnets
    Today we recommend oversea studying students, where we give you some tips on how to study over sea. Now we are looking at university. We consider three different universitys all in the budget pice range and, as usual we will feature the good points, the problems and our verdicts.
    The first university we are looking at was by Havard unviversity and it had several good points to recommend it. Our students liked the fact that it had equiped. The only problem with this university is that it is quite small, but they did not think that mattered too much and they have given this one a verdict of satisfactory
    The next university was by Offord university, and this time our students were pleased to a university which is quite big. On the minus side, our students did not like the fact that the equipment of it is poor.
    lần đầu up bài lên diễn đàn thui, thầy gửi bài sửa vào mail cho e, xong rùi thầy xóa bài này giúp e nha. do e ít lên diễn đàn mong thầy cho gửi e cái mail để e gửi bài cho thầy cho dễ mail của em:hvnhpro@gmail.com
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    Chỉnh sửa cuối: 16/10/11
  2. hell0_m0t0

    hell0_m0t0 Well-Known Member

    Tham gia ngày:
    24/3/11
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    hình như là sai nhiều lắm đấy ;))
  3. MooMoo

    MooMoo .

    Tham gia ngày:
    4/3/11
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    guess
    begin playing
    immediately

    đoạn 2 ngại quá chả đọc :">
  4. hvnhpro

    hvnhpro Member

    Tham gia ngày:
    6/3/11
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    ngại quá sai rõ nhiều;))
    thế mới bảo thầy cho e gửi bài =mail

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